Better Letter... Comments

I was impressed that she said this was a letter. So it is. It is lined up, however, as a poem. I wish people wouldn't do that, but they do. I don't mark down for it normally. I won't do it here, certainly. But I found this piece wanting in several ways. Mostly in the presentation of the content. This was a difficult challenge. It should not be underestimated. So, I'll give it an 8. GW62