Better Forgotten, Forsaken Comments

The poem shows about your nature, how selflessly you want to make others happy. I enjoyed reading it, it's really good. Thanks for sharing it.

Good flow and beautiful write, but bit sad. Rgds Nooruddeen

Mariah Simpson said: good poem i like it :)

nice to read, it was really good i enjoyed it.

hey...wow that was a really good write! sorry it took so long to read it...lol but anyway that was really good...

to die for and to risk everything to see others is happy is very seflless..but happiness from them, you cannot control, for they hold that within their hands..be happy for yourself and for what you had tried to do for other's sake because not everyone can be giving as you..happiness within is happiness that will overflow and be shared..don't be so hard on yourself. :) good work though.. :) keep'm coming

i loved it it was good.........a 10

....hmmm interesting...write..10s

oh sorry Alen..didnot know hat your poem is sad..but the sadness is source of the creation so use it to produce beautiful poem always..well said poem..

Good idea, nice choice of words, good rhyme, beautiful flow. Can't say I like the last para though. think positive, Great talent to write stuff like this. Best wishes Alen.

hello Alen! ! ! 'its better to have me forgotten, forsaken, unknown and dead, than trying hard to have them live nice but be helpless and be eventually hurt and left bereft' oh gosh i know this feeling.. i feel exactly like this now... just that i dont have the guts to even commit suicide.. i mean i m not all that enthusiastic about poems either.. i got lots of flattering comments... i mean i writ poems for people and all they admire is writing... why cant people see they my emotions, ... and when i write a poem people back away from me! ! ! ... i really know this feeling friend.. thanks for sharing this with me.. i vnt been to poems all that much either.. anyway take care..... with lots of love shan