Monday, February 23, 2009

Better Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

I put the knife to my skin,
Pressing hard enough for the bleeding to begin.
I watch the blood splash to the floor,
While making sure noone comes in the door.
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Kiki Marie
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Romeo Della Valle 01 December 2011

And you will see better days I am very sure of that. Just keep letting your true feelings out and magically translated in the Poetry World, like you did with this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented works! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Sabrina Perry 08 April 2009

i myself have struggled in this way though iv been lucky enough to find the better days this time you spend suffering wont be for very long i hope this day will come for you im sure the right will come from wrong .. i understand, ive had my own pain....: ( your poem truely touched me.

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Tai Chi Italy 04 April 2009

Better days are just ahead my friend. Great read. You explain the power of this sort of release on a tortured soul so vividly I was bleeding with you. I feel much better for this metaphorical release. I do hope you feel the same for writing it. A peace filled weekend to you, smiling from sun drenched Cornwall, Tai

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