Wednesday, December 30, 2015

Better Days. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm always dreaming of better days
under the sun.
Palm tree shades
I can be your cool baby,
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Leah Ayliffe
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Rishi Thakkar 07 January 2016

It's a poem it's a song Its an expression which can be read again on n on... Good work

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Paul Davies 31 December 2015

Like the well-known story of the Hindu student who read through the Hebrew Bible and couldn't see any religion in it, I read through this very good verse and can't see where the love is in it.

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Rajnish Manga 30 December 2015

You act like it's nothing special I'll pretend like it's the real deal behind my guarded thoughts....... What a wonderful expression! Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 December 2015

Beautiful drop. Full of love and passion it flows so nice. Have a great time.

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Leah Ayliffe

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