Better Days Comments

Love it

Wow! Amazing You have so much strength to give to others. thank You

a beautifully compiled piece of writing.....

Well written. Thanks for sharing.

a very deeply written poem

Great piece, very inspiring. Better days dont come cheap, you got to earn them.

i got nothing to say accept well done on your work the last few lines i loved nice message

Never took excuses, I'm part in The select few that let dreams form in Reality while haters sleep... I like these lines, they let dreamers live... May peace and love find you my my friend...

you should be one of the models of the new generation. very nice poem keep on writing.

A straight 10 out of 10 for the thinking itself! ! ! ! !

Thank you all, appreciate the opinions & critique -Stevens Cadet

Excellent! A deep and touching write that clearly shows your great optimistic desire to move on after going through a tumultuous life. Your honest feelings are displayed in such a impressive way that it can really move the readers! A well crafted and thought provoking write that shows your feelings and talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

Loved it Stephen, woke up to better me. I liked the story, the personalization if your growth, as a boy into a man with questions and reservations but then understanding and finding your way. An inspiration for a pirate constantly waking up to a worse me. If a pirate can't laugh at himself everyone else will. Great write.

Very nice poem. The optimism at the end is really uplifting. We do learn from our difficulties and the better me will survive Excellent

We've to move on thou' there is troubles in our way, this's what I've learnt during the difficult time but e'eryone wants to keep on an even keel at all times.. 'Tis a very good poem....

Great job here Steven, i like when you showing your lil sis of the values of a woman, and you are actually showing some values as family member and a man, the poem really moving and looking so bright in every words..so fit wit the title, keep it more inspiring in the next chapter_Unwritten Soul