Saturday, July 2, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

To Forget, and feel lost forever from yesterday
I would give almost anything to do
It was wonderful what happened all those years ago
But the past is overflown with disappointing memories too
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Achim Wollscheid
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 July 2011

It was an outstanding poem. Rich in both imagery and style. Nice thoughts. I liked it very much. I voted it 10. Kindly read and also vote for my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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