Thursday, August 30, 2007

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My eyelids heavy
Smell of burnt flesh
Blinding light
Piercing the void within
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Dana Lamb
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Colin J... 30 August 2007

Liked your poems, and this one is still a good poem.. But, please do not self-harm.. Colin J...

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