Sunday, February 5, 2006

Betrayl Comments

Rating: 4.3

I see it now all so clearly,
Again I have been lied to,
But instead of crying so much like I want to,
I run into the forest where I feel at home,
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Natalie Olivia 05 January 2014

Very sad, you can feel the hurt. I liked this line Even now I am losing another piece of myself, I stand still your words of pain haunting my very thoughts, well done

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Elya Thorn 05 February 2006

Such a beautiful writing, and strong, powerfull in the feeling it expresses, I had to give it a 10! well done! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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