Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Betrayl 1 Comments

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I thought he was nice
I thought i was right
To believe every word he said to me that night
Little did i know the thoughts in his mind
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Ashley Stone
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Julianna Mcleod 28 March 2013

Pain* lol not paint, silly me

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Julianna Mcleod 28 March 2013

This poem totally hit home for me. I was shot with every word, true as true could be. I'm 15 and I've been through more paint then I thought possible. I loved him, he pretended to love me. He hurt me so much that I'm forever broken. We met online, never face to face. It made it easy for him to do that to me. He lied about who he was, then i forgave him. And he lied again. The police were called and now he's in jail, possibly for twelve years. It's crazy, it got way way out of control. It's in the media now... more people know... It's a huge story. And i'm just so hurt...I'm broken and forever healing.. this poem made me cry. It was like bullets of OMG that's exactly right! , exactly how I feel so sad....: (

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Subbaraman N V 05 April 2008

Most unfortunate! That is a part of life!

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