Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Betrayel Comments

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It walks by your hanging head,
transparent shame,
unholy bed.
There in your mind
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Sally Plumb Plumb
guilt lust
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Scarlett Outlaw 21 November 2012

Oh My God, this poem gave me the chills! ! But all the same: A Fab Piece! ! :)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 02 June 2020

Thanks for your reaction, Scarllet

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

'tis a very g'd poem! ! ! Excellent penning! ! !

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Sally Plumb Plumb 02 June 2020

Hi, Vipins, Thankyou for your kind comment.

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John Raubenheimer 22 November 2011

Self can't release to love, the peace, the former trust. unholy bed There in your mind These are the phrases I like best, and look! they make a small and lovely poem when you put them together! Lovely work Sally!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 02 June 2020

Thankyou for your interest, John.

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