Betrayel Comments

so sorry but great poem

Hm. From reading this poem and some of your others you seem to write alot about your feelings of betrayal. This poem, I think, really shows how you feel quite graphically and I think it is very effective.

Hey i noticed that some of your poems talk about the theme of loneliness. It seemed to be that you are really lonely

this is really true sorry you feel this way if u need even thing i'm here just saying lol :)