Betrayed Young Lady Comments

Walked depressed to her home, Drops of tears falling to ground- Days of laughter quickly gone, Warmth embrace no more again. a strong decision....... i do not need him anymore...... i will not accept. he is a betrayer...... determination, the strength of the decision. tony

Write comment. Great poetry, Beena. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

Wow... Looking forward for more... keep it up

Beautiful poem beena

Very nice

Very beautiful

very nice. meaningful poem

Hats off to youyou hold your head high...Heart touching poem.

With deep distress she fell on knee- No more I need his touch, No more I need him again, cried she.- love, relationship, pain. sufferings all well portrayed. tony

Many dreamz after the marriage is torned by most people attitude.your experience is pained godbles

The agony of beautiful women in Life after the marriage is excellently penned

Heart touching... meaning full tears... Good...