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Betrayed Trust Comments

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Like raindrops from the sky
So are you
Leaving me to hold to my lost self
Liking you to a wheel speeding on earth
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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 August 2018

Though you are my palm I do not know the lines on you I rather believe a fiend than you.fears, pain, suffering, betrayal described in picturesque terms.. thank u dear poet.. tony

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My pleasure Sir. I'm grateful. Reading most of my poems will really help. Especially me. Criticism builds a writer

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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Umuchu in Auguata L.G.A of Anambra state
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