Thursday, November 12, 2015

Betrayed Love Comments

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Never in my entire life did I ever imagine you,
You of all people would hurt not only my heart but my spirit too,
What intense love we shared and what flaming hate you grew for me
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

'Many a night I prayed asking God to show me what I did wrong to make you hate me, You say you don’t hate me then how then would you hurt me so? If not hate then what would have made you spite me this much? ' A very relatable situation and a nice write... Thanks for sharing Elizabeth..

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Shakil Ahmed 12 November 2015

yes betrayal gives us much pain, but when love betrays us life becomes gloomy, well-expressed passions, i enjoyed reading the poem

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