Friday, July 11, 2008

Betrayed By Him Comments

Rating: 4.8

Thank you for making this a living hell,
the one person i was supposed to trust, said he had nothing to tell.
but then i found out, that he had lied to me
and he then had the nerve to tell me he was sorry!
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Heather Coldwell
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Greenwolfe 1962 12 July 2008

I gave this poem my normal high grade of 9 because Heather really made the hurt come through these lines. I was mighty impressed by the word choices that made that happen. GW62

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Dhruv Gaba 11 July 2008

hey i wrote a poem wid a imilar title betrayed by her! ! !

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