Friday, November 25, 2016
Betrayed Comments
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i told my eyes to say nothing
my tongue to blink i'm better
without you
i trained these hands to sing
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7/22/2025 2:20:45 AM # 1.0.0
An interesting, imaginative poem, where you have body parts doing thins they can't (the eyes talk, the tongue blinks, etc.) . I like it, especially the ending: and i'm scrambled like the morning eggs i will happily make for you I have one that is similar in some ways. You might like my poem 'Do Something Different'.
I just read your poem and absolutely love it! It immediately put me in a place that's oddly comfortable and every bit exciting.