Betrayed Comments

wow very passionate. i loved the way you started this one off. top to bttom a great piece.

the best of betrayal...wid the mixture of anger n passion... lovely 1.

excellently written.......sad though............betrayal is such a pain...........easily understandable and heart felt............... amazing stuff.......cheers ;)

alicia...a really beautiful poem yes its bitter sweet and tangy...but great write cheers

Sweet yet bitter I love it...I know how u feel we always seem to want the things that hurts us most somtimes. Great poem, thanx DIMPLzZ