Thursday, October 9, 2008

Betrayed Comments

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she felt she was safe
But then he betrayed her
He said he would always be there
But then then he left her
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Kelly Persinger
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Kelly Seale 24 September 2012

As soon as he got what he wanted, he was gone, promise and all, as if the words meant nothing... but the worst thing about the betrayal.... those words did mean something.... Good Ink Kelly... This one touched me, which is what I look for in other's work.... Nice! ; -) -Kelly S.

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Kelly Persinger

Kelly Persinger

Shelbyville, Ky
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