Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Betrayed Comments

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I told you once and I told you again
But you did it anyways
You betrayed me and filled me with rage
You kissed the beast with no regrets
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liliana villar
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Adeline Foster 06 March 2012

You said it, girl. Many a one would love to have said it just that way. Read mine - The Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 27 February 2012

Wow. Oh God! This is so true! how on earth have you managed to write so perfectly. I love this poem a lot.

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Dave Walker 01 February 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write.

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