Betrayals (Song Version) Comments
The heart inside is not only shown
And it's sitting here, tearing apart all I've ever known
All is lost and all forgotten
Everything falls apart and disappears
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A good lyric i can tell but more than that i was intriguing how the melody sounds? because the lyrics and the arrangement sound pretty cool...I think it moving but dark feeling take some air ambiance...could be it sounds like Avril Lavigne style? i dont know but this is a good trial, keep writing and thanks for inviting me Tiff_Unwritten Soul
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7/28/2025 12:58:00 AM # 1.0.0
This lamentation is wonderful to read! It reminds me of Robert Browning's soliloquies in his dramatic poems!