Sunday, January 22, 2012

Betrayal Of The Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunset that betrayed me,
Hearing the city roar with life,
The artificial light
Illuminate the machines and poison
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Romeo Della Valle 17 March 2012

A clear picture of New York City is drawn in this thought provoking and well crafted poem! I love it! Betrayal has hundred faces but PAIN is the unique word behind it! Powerful write and thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep it up! If time permits, please read my poem titled: Betrayal! Take care, Romeo_NYC

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Dave Walker 22 January 2012

Great poem, really like it. Great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Mental Hospital.

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