Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Betrayal Of Love Comments

Rating: 3.5

My first taste of betrayal,
was one to not be forgotten,
Betrayed by the one whom was the one I could confide,
Ripping at the sewn bits of my heart....
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Crimson Love
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grace 03 December 2019

Add a comment.interesting

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Daniel 11 December 2018

A sad, honest poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

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Thoughts Of A Poet 19 October 2012

this one is a good one and why don't you write poetry any-more you were so good at it

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Lenore Lee 16 October 2011

This poem is a real tearjerker. I could feel my heart breaking along with yours, I so long to ease your pain.

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Stefanie Fontker 11 October 2011

Aw, mon amour. What a heart breaking poem. The strikes our loved ones try to burst our hearts with, always leave the worst scars.

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