Saturday, August 15, 2009

Betrayal Comments

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I can only look down as I write this,
as the fire blinds my only sight,
letting this anger which I won't miss,
destroy the last bit of my might.
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Javier Falcon
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i miss reading such great pieces from you. this is strong and powerful. it captures the reader in so many ways. your an amazing writer.

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May Namoc 15 August 2009

once again, you astonish my mind and create beautiful, powerful, and emotional pieces that leaves my mind experiencing the pain that you had felt. bravo, of course. :)

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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