Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Betrayal.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

It started ever so slow,
I never knew of you,
For I was a blindfish,
When you pulled me out,
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Akhila Viswambharan
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Kesav Easwaran 27 April 2009

excellent monologue Akhila...though the central theme is gloom the words there and your presentation style, brighten up your write...thanks...10

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Reet M 12 April 2009

very well said...this poem expresses the reality of this fake world...

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