Betrayal Comments

Falling to the floor like autumn leaves, great metaphor.

I loved this piece. I've written a piece with the same title. You've illustrated it with just a few words.

WOW! Short but very powerful. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Sometimes there is more truth in what is left unsaid. Well done, Jim! Linda :)

The empty lies, with no worth beneath the expected meaning. Great job. Tough vaugley written, it is vividly detailed in the most astounding way. Be Different. Be You Elizabeth deSpain

your poems do touch.

fabulous. What a capture!

Vivid and beautiful imagery - you have a special way with words. S :)