Betrayal Comments

Powerful read, you put such pain into your imagery and it all comes through like a jagged razor.

Betrayed: Possibly Befuddled: Definitely Not Beautiful: Without A Doubt.

Taniya this poem is great. I wrote a poem called 'I need someone to talk to, someone to tell'. These are some of the emotions I experienced after I told the story. So for me, yours was very touching. Hey check my poems out and tell me what you think. They're under Mz. Honesty Only.