Betrayal Comments

The peotry is excellent but the voice not.

The agony of the human condition! Excellent.

Great stuff, cut down the middle and left floundering. well written! ! it sorts out the would be's and the fakers...from the pure of heart.

Seems like a very effective Reverse Psychology to me to attract attention from friends who start to ignore our presence. Very good piece though.10 for me.

Your wit and sarcasm made me laugh. Many of us have non-friends deserving of those exact words.

I find this poem really interesting. Who is the friend that is portrayed in this poem? Because he(it?) hasn't just hurt you, but also numerous others that was 'left for dead' by him. What did he do to inflict so much suffering(death?) and hurt on so many people? Hmm...: -)

LOVE the intro! Such sarcasm 'good day to thee my worthless friend' i daresay it should be the title and Oft repeated in the mantra! Wish i had created the line myself!

What is betrayal? Lemme hear YOUR version, and does it mean someone is 'betraying' if they sleep with someone else when they're 'with' someone they 'say' they 'love? ' What is that considered?

Very well written and touched a nerve, eased some hurt. Thank you.

really good poem friend...lot of anguish.. no wonder so many people read ur poems..

yes so doom and gloom the friendship.

Without betrayal we all stay children. Though it be bitter, may we grow strong from it.

Ouch! I think this is how friends felt when I left South Africa.

i love this poem.. it is deeply moving and very profound.. i think you have a wonderful way with words and conveying emotion.. i cant wait to read more :) xx