Monday, September 2, 2013

Betrayal Comments

Rating: 3.5

Our glances clashed,
Met.......
A single tear
Pearl like,
...
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Khairul Ahsan 25 May 2014

It's a beautiful poem! 'A single nerve twitched, Like a dark poem Across a page bewitched, ' - Is a beautiful expression! 'And I looked, For a sign On the blank canvas of your Lying face, Trying to see a lamp of hope Light up Those vacant eyes Which I thought were mine' - Very poetic indeed! I think this poem is underrated and am surprised to see no comment yet from any reader, I am very pleased to rate it 10/10. Well done!

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