Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Betrayal Comments

Rating: 5.0

How can one fathom
A person to be true

In what they say
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Kaila George
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Hannington Mumo 29 October 2015

A well-written poem. Many people are traitors. I have been betrayed more than I can count by opportunistic girls. If you lack friends all over the place, give me a shout and we'll mend the cracks...Hahaha! JK.

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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2014

A friend in need is a friend indeed. A friend indeed is almost the equal of a good and happy family. Anyone who has found a good friend has found a rare gem. It's a pity that after so much trust and love shown to enemies wearing the masks of friendship we get betrayed at last. A good write.

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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2014

A friend in need is a friend indeed. A friend indeed is almost the equal of a good and happy family. Anyone who has found a good friend has found a rare gem. It's a pity that after so much trust and love shown to enemies wearing the masks of friendship we get betrayed at last. A good write.

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(De Va) 23 August 2012

Sometimes what one sees as betrayal is not. Sometimes it is letting another grow. Sometimes it is turning away from self and not from you. and Perhaps...what you feel is betrayal is a feeling in another of falling into an abyss so deep and dark that the soul is lost for a brief moment...Reach out....she is waiting...bearhugs

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Pheko Motaung 06 June 2012

Lack of trust.Deception.Lies and betrayal.All painful hurtful expressions.The world is friendlier better place without them.Thank you and mightily well done.Yuh brilliant!

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Simon Collins 23 May 2012

Betrayal is tough, because trust is everything in love, nice poem, thanks

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Joseph Poewhit 23 May 2012

Deception hurts a person much

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