Betrayal Comments

I have had the problem of forgiving someone for something they did. it ws a family member.

um no comment. Seriously no comment

Trust is not just given freely It must be earned. A forgiveness of the broken is never easy. But it truly should not be forgotten. Indeed, this is definitely a good poem and their is truth what you say. Wisdom is never gained in a single day. But instead experience of years past.

hmm..this is a very wise thought...keep it up :)

This is a good poem, I think it could flow a little better. You should separate it line's and work on the flow. Adding a little rhyme would be good too if you can but standing on its own, its a good poem...