Monday, August 10, 2009

Betray Comments

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danger stranger walking through the door
were did a stranger come from all
the way out here in avalon
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graham russell
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Winnie Angel 14 August 2009

its a different kind of a poem..the complexity the tension in the air...the betryal trait in every indivisual that kills many a good things in ourselves...very meaningful write.....Winnie

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Inner Whispers 11 August 2009

Such meaningful poem. death comes stranger to you repent tell the name of the one who hired a stranger to kill a king so betray is his name you say where at real life I have encountered this scene often. Great write, Graham!

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