Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Betiyan Comments

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Bhagwan ka diya wardan hai betiyan,
mata pita ka aatmasamman hai betiyan,
tapti dhup mein thandi chaoon hai betiyan,
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Tripsha Ghosh
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Ann Mary Giju 19 January 2018

So nice 😊😃😇

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Ramesh Rai 03 August 2013

to day i posted one hindi poem TAPIT.plz do read. i have posted in hindi n bengali too. your is nice penning. keep writing

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Gajanan Mishra 02 July 2013

bhagawan ka diya ashirbad, I like it. good poem. Lady's first. twameva mata ca pita twameva. mata yani, mother first. Nari purusha. Laxminarayan etc. I invite you to read my poems on woman and comment.

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Vishal Sharma 02 July 2013

yeah, thats truth you should be proud of a great poem memorable one

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Tripsha Ghosh

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