Thursday, September 11, 2008

Bethlehem Star Haiku Comments

Rating: 4.8

The sun disc rises

on nodding Bethlehem stars
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Allemagne Roßmann 24 August 2011

The sun is tired Grave continues to be dugged up and up For the fight in yards to shine the stars mine all mine are stars until the twinkle retired Some call me Philistine, some crystalline And another Israel, others accused assign Nice piece of yours

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Yelena M. 25 July 2009

My favourite haiku of yours, Lorraine...A breath of eternity over the Earth..Thanks for sharing. A.

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Malini Kadir 17 February 2009

Stars still linger..... So does a positive feel..... hope of resurrection!

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