Tuesday, October 16, 2012

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In the grey mist of an English dawn,
the starling stamps and prods and probes
and generally disturbs
the lawn,
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Brian Taylor
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Dustin Bradley 16 October 2012

It has a good flow. Like the ending. Good work..

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