Sunday, May 4, 2008

Best Time! - Senryu Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkest before dawn
Best time for neighbour friend mine
Steal newspaper mine!
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2020

Ha ha ha Amazingly humorous. Short, witty and compelling imagery.

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 05 November 2009

Nice and humorous, well penned.10.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 October 2009

Wow! Excellent Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comment on my poem. Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 September 2009

Very funny. But it may be better termed as a senryu than a haiku, I humbly feel Sir. But very striking and enjoyable piece.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 February 2009

Instantly Iaughed after completing the reading. Very nic.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 January 2009

short ann funny........

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Gauri Gupta 22 December 2008

Brilliant! That is all I can say. :)

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Kesav Easwaran 23 November 2008

that was thirty years back, Reshma...my good friend who stayed in the adjacent room of the dormitory...

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Reshma Ramesh 23 November 2008

hilarious haiku...........well penned does he still do it?

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Chitra - 07 July 2008

nice one, and true too

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 June 2008

fantastic, :) thanks for sharing

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Subbaraman N V 13 June 2008

Short and sweet as a haiku should be. Here is a nice message!

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

Lol! ! nice one! Humour in Haiku...

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Flora Gillingham 16 May 2008

Made me laugh! Well done. Fx

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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