Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 8, 2012

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It is matter of joke
When poems offer me stroke
They receive more 'likes' than comments
I console self with 'likes'' rather than resent
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Anand Pisharody11 minutes ago But, I just don't understand how poems offer you stroke.... Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago when read by none and appreciated by even nobody.. it is shock in literary terms 0 Unique

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Look like a Satire. Danuw Rachman6 minutes ago talk about like.... it's something that really common today, even without the reason... hhaha: D Ah, nowadays... people who appreciate something is much less than the people who just want to show their selves... don't know why... and i do agree that best product is not sold but to Keep... :) thanks for sharing Comment 0 Nice...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Unique Donald Loudon10 minutes ago Fascinating in your comparisons, yet some confusing, also! Comment 0 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Look like a Satire. Danuw Rachman6 minutes ago talk about like.... it's something that really common today, even without the reason... hhaha: D Ah, nowadays... people who appreciate something is much less than the people who just want to show their selves... don't know why... and i do agree that best product is not sold but to Keep... :) thanks for sharing Comment 0 Nice... Anand Pisharody11 minutes ago But, I just don't understand how poems offer you stroke.... Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago when read by none and appreciated by even nobody.. it is shock in literary terms 0 Unique Donald Loudon10 minutes ago Fascinating in your comparisons, yet some confusing, also! Comment 0 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Ronald McWilliams11 minutes ago seemed cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Muhammad Rafique Farooqi you are a versatile poet. about a minute ago · Unlike · 1 Shouvik Rryan Roy and 2 others like this. Porshyee Burton your poems are so wonderful that it gets hard to find words of appreciation for each new poem and one is then compelled to press just 'like'. It doesn't mean your poems are not loved, they are really great and inspiring.2 minutes ago · Like Deletejadia4708au Ian Sawicki ah such is the way in these poetry groups it seems, not many leave comments, but at least the poems are there for people to read if they wish. :) 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Deletejadia4708au Rahkehs Aziram DG hehhehe 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Pamela Jane Tennant I never understood why writer's who want reader's don't bother to read. In a writer's community all should be eager to show support and to take time to express how the poem/story/article made them feel and to give feedback as well. This is pretty wordy, but your meaning is well conveyed. I laugh with Abdul: -D Good job.9 hours ago · Like · 1 Deletejadia4708au Annie LoveDevine Carrasquillo HMMMMMMMM...6 hours ago · Like Golden Sparrow nice 15 hours ago · Like Efe Light Sakpere Hey Mister, what's inside ur container? a few seconds ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2012

Maisie 2012.08.10 08: 43 I think we have all been there - posting what we feel (often rightly so) is a good piece of work only for it to escape even one comment. Like the pace of this one, could be a rap. I have a bad habit of reading brief stuff (and also writing! !) as I always seem to be on the run! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2012

Porshyee Burton your poems are so wonderful that it gets hard to find words of appreciation for each new poem and one is then compelled to press just 'like'. It doesn't mean your poems are not loved, they are really great and inspiring. 2 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Re: Best product not sold (Score: 1) by rondo on Wednesday, August 08,2012 (08: 16: 07) some of your descriptive is less than comprehendable but you rhyme and if one trys they can follow the premise witch is better than most...nice work poet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Golden Sparrow nice 10 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

It is matter of joke When poems offer me stroke They receive more “likes” than comments I console self with “likes”’ rather than resent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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