I remember now with a look back in time
A look at the friendship we used to have
It was so happy shiny and good
Then suddenly it went from good to bad
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omfg i know im a girl but i loved it it has so much...emotion... u know i really enjoyed reading this i gave it a 10 no doubt but um who was this for? its just so great
This is a solid write. The rhymes and rhythm are not the best but could have been a lot worse. This was a difficult thing to write so credit must be given for the effort alone. The meaning was clear and that is half the battle. No need for interpretation. I like it that way. GW62