Monday, May 18, 2009

Best Of Care........Dedicated To The Selfless Intern Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ringed in a circle of compassion,
Sipped from the pond of dedication,

Values of core at school attended.
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Indira Babbellapati 12 June 2009

this should remind doctors all over of the hypocrat's vow they take before entering the profession...a very very good read, doc! you excel in your couplets...

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Give to needy the best of care... that is need of hour dear.. beautiful write. bravo tks for sharing

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a wonderful poem heartfully said..10+++++

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 May 2009

A thoguut provoking medical advice from a great doctor...nice, strong diction 10+++

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Raj Nandy 31 May 2009

Let the Gods bless you! LET 'THE BEST OF CARE' BE THE MOTTO OF ALL PHYSICIANS! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Catrina Heart 31 May 2009

Lots to learn of kindness to share. Give to needy the best of care. ------- Selfless service is what they need...........10

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rago rago 31 May 2009

best of care........nicely written and expressed in an eloquent way......you have penned well...........

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Meggie Gultiano 30 May 2009

Touch of gentle patience, and love. Through a hand that wears a glove ......................................................... I love these lines..A delight to read.

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Ejaz Khan 29 May 2009

Outstanding! One can feel the positive flow of your passion in this poem. I likwed it alot, keep creating beautiful poetry. A 10+++ with pleasure Regards

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 May 2009

A beautiful poem pertaining to great dedication and deep love for the profession. 10/10 and best wishes for the young interns. Naseer

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Wonderful dedication to a young intern with insightful and empathetic words. Great rhymes too. 10 Karin Anderson

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 24 May 2009

Heartfelt dedication, a beautiful write indeed which will inspire young interns.

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Anjali Sinha 24 May 2009

hey ur a great one for all these rhymes wowwwwww every stanza rhymes so well a tenner from me anjali

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Akram Awadat 24 May 2009

very nice poem, very beautiful one thanks a lot

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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2009

I like the way you have used rhyming couplets in this poem to those who dedicate their lives to caring for the sick and infirm. Your first line 'ringed in a circle of compassion' is excellent and your sentiments throughout the piece are well expressed. My only criticism is about your use of meter - and many may disagree - but I like rhyming verse to have a regular beat. That being said, I did enjoy the poem and this couplet stood out: 'Unknown patient or one who is dear. Accept HIS will when the end is near.' 'Thou shalt not kill, but may not strive officiously to keep alive.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ejaz Khan 22 May 2009

Blessed are the hands in service of their fellow humans. especially when they can even hold and control the magic of pen. Well penned! 10+++ Regards

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Naidz Ladia 22 May 2009

love and care should go hand in hand..every lines express strong emotion and strong dedication to your work..naizz

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Fiona Davidson 18 May 2009

Sometimes I see hospital doctors working and know there is a magic in what they do...performing miracles with no sense of what they are doing other than their job...brilliant write Saadat...Fi 10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 18 May 2009

There is a mystic about Doctors

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