Ringed in a circle of compassion,
Sipped from the pond of dedication,
Values of core at school attended.
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Give to needy the best of care... that is need of hour dear.. beautiful write. bravo tks for sharing
A thoguut provoking medical advice from a great doctor...nice, strong diction 10+++
Let the Gods bless you! LET 'THE BEST OF CARE' BE THE MOTTO OF ALL PHYSICIANS! 10+ -Raj Nandy
Lots to learn of kindness to share. Give to needy the best of care. ------- Selfless service is what they need...........10
best of care........nicely written and expressed in an eloquent way......you have penned well...........
Touch of gentle patience, and love. Through a hand that wears a glove ......................................................... I love these lines..A delight to read.
Outstanding! One can feel the positive flow of your passion in this poem. I likwed it alot, keep creating beautiful poetry. A 10+++ with pleasure Regards
A beautiful poem pertaining to great dedication and deep love for the profession. 10/10 and best wishes for the young interns. Naseer
Wonderful dedication to a young intern with insightful and empathetic words. Great rhymes too. 10 Karin Anderson
Heartfelt dedication, a beautiful write indeed which will inspire young interns.
hey ur a great one for all these rhymes wowwwwww every stanza rhymes so well a tenner from me anjali
I like the way you have used rhyming couplets in this poem to those who dedicate their lives to caring for the sick and infirm. Your first line 'ringed in a circle of compassion' is excellent and your sentiments throughout the piece are well expressed. My only criticism is about your use of meter - and many may disagree - but I like rhyming verse to have a regular beat. That being said, I did enjoy the poem and this couplet stood out: 'Unknown patient or one who is dear. Accept HIS will when the end is near.' 'Thou shalt not kill, but may not strive officiously to keep alive.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Blessed are the hands in service of their fellow humans. especially when they can even hold and control the magic of pen. Well penned! 10+++ Regards
love and care should go hand in hand..every lines express strong emotion and strong dedication to your work..naizz
Sometimes I see hospital doctors working and know there is a magic in what they do...performing miracles with no sense of what they are doing other than their job...brilliant write Saadat...Fi 10+++
this should remind doctors all over of the hypocrat's vow they take before entering the profession...a very very good read, doc! you excel in your couplets...