Best Friends Forever? Comments

And you said you couldn't rhyme.... Very well done darling! I really love the feeling you put into it.

The emotional quality in this blows me away. Substantial. It flows so well, and the poem progresses nicely into your ending thought: 'Friendship is not all it seems' Pathos, darling, Pathos... Lovely, darling. Just find and dandy. Constructive Criticism: I can feel a hint of phrases Ive heard before, but no matter because this poem is your own Imagery: Great. Literary devices: YEAH! Content: Oh, man.