Best Friends Comments

Your poem speaks volume of friendships...most friendships are short lived, a few are everlasting, nevertheless, we learn -or should learn lessons from those we meet on life's journey. Thanks for inviting me to read your work

Best friends are always special friends and special part of life. We had our fun We played our games It was unbelievable A dream come true A tenner for the attitude depicted here.

Its A Beautiful Poem,

The structure here is better. But silly grammatical and spelling mistakes. In the first 'stanza' you write 'I expected it would last but not so abruptly.'? ? ? Perhaps you meant 'I expected it might end but not so abruptly.' One must work harder to make a good poem than to do anything else in life. Yet it must look easy.

Hello Shiny...trust broken in friendship is so difficult to repair but if the friendship is worth saving save it... don't wait... enjoyed your poem very much I wrote a poem on friendship about 40 years ago have a look nothing changes... regards Alf

amazing poem filled with so much emotion. keep it up.10+++

I really like this one, 'We stuck together though Still had our fun Played our games The future lay neatly So clearly' How I wish life was this easy.10/10

So sad...well go and talk 2 her....... why are sitting around life is too short.....well express 10

Life is a journey, a voyage full of so many surprises. Life offers us so many things, and all depends on what we look for in the future, not dwell on the past, as past are just memories.

I agree with jameshia it was very good, it shows how friends come and go but the memories are here to stay

'Love is not finding the perfect someone and living happily for the rest of all eternity, but the ability to look past all the imperfections and see a diamond in the rough', ~Poetic Kadri The poem expresses things that mere words cannot explain. Each word in your poem brings foreshadowing to the next and light to the one before. 10+

nicely expressed! great write! 10+

yup...friends can be like that so people have to be carefull what they say to certain people...did u like him? if u did then I felt ur pain... I'm sorry...

Awww such a sad but good poem. Super job on it!