Best Day With My Warden Comments

Ohh! that's a great poem and also a great moment with your warden. thanks for sharing......................

BTW if you get spare time, do read my newly written ''Welcome To Pakistan''.

BTW if you get spare time, do read my newly written ''Welcome To Pakistan''.

The poem has a nice touch of humor and the simplicity of this poem is the beauty of the poem. Yeah, I do agree with your notes that the poem could have a better expression but everyone's first write is a bit childish. Mine was too! But nonetheless, the poem is a humorous tale. BTW, Why have you stopped writing nowadays? You are a very good poet and you have many capabilities. I still remember the beauty of your poem ''Shrieking East''. It was really an excellent write.

very beautiful, my dear son, go on writing. Go on reading also. Thanks.

Your first poem is very nice, funny and pleasing. In childish mind you have composed like a matured poet. Schoolmates tell very nice experience of their life and you write very nice poem. Each line gives clear picture of nice school days. It provokes thought and takes us back to school days memory. Excellent ONE.10/10 FOR YOU.