This vigil cripples my thoughts
Drags me down into shadows
Darkest depths that smother
With each breath you take
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you need only rise above the clouds to see the stars. I do love this poem, very beautifully sad. PC
I agree with what a lot have said here. It took me years to realize that I opened so many doors best left closed. I am going through my mind now and closing those doors. This is a sad and painful poem to read but it didn't trigger any sad thoughts. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara
Your strength is drawn from.. a heart of gold holding together the pieces of love and care, fear and anxiety....that heart is yours...x Sue x
sad but so well written, sometimes it takes all that we have to keep our heads out of the water...great write..10
Your insight becomes brilliant Fi... and your pen has become tinged with a golden touch.... this piece will stay with me - - Fay.
Loneliness is a blanket I shrug off as it masks me Strength is only an illusion Within these walls flickering ----- first class imagery..........loved it! ! ! !
This vigil cripples your thoughts down into the shadows with smoother perception. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.10