Saturday, February 26, 2005

Best China Comments

Rating: 4.9

This place and
all our encounters
are made of glass-
''fire it up''
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Adryan Barnathan
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Duncan Wyllie 04 April 2006

LOve the images in this one.Not quiet sure about the ending, .But still a well written piece from you.Love Duncan

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Gershon Hepner 15 November 2005

Great poem. But don't underestimate the beauty of craquelure! Gershon

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Max Reif 23 August 2005

This is a WONDERFUL, resonant metaphor, and you develop it nicely! The ending hasn't quite computed for me yet.

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Sandra Osborne 08 March 2005

Verry nice indeed, loved the ending.

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