Saturday, October 17, 2015

Best-Blood: Mine! .... [medical Miracles; Fantasy (If You Must Know): Me; Humor; Short] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I give freely of my life-giving blood;
mine’s the best around, though it may look like mud.
Yes, it’s different from blood one usually does see.
It’s packed with little miracles, processed by …….little old ME.
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Bri Edwards
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2022

Wonderful...... just!

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Akhtar Jawad 25 April 2017

In a humorous style a nice message the humanity.

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Valsa George 20 October 2015

Wow.......This poem on blood donation is humour of the best kind....! I know you are a regular blood donor, but never knew if your blood has such potency.....! These days infertility patients are on the rise! So it would be a blessing for them! Do you really mean to say that I taught you comedy! This is like saying 'the dog taught the squirrel to climb trees'! In fact I learnt what is humour from Mr. Bri! These days sometimes I try miserably to step into his shoes! Thanks for the dedication!

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Darlene Walsh 18 October 2015

LOL, very potent stuff. And I knew you were old, but I didn't know you were around for Lazarus and David, I believe that makes you older than Methuselah. Very entertaining, but I'm a bit disappointed that you actually helped Lance cheat, next time you donate to such a cheater, make sure you've consumed copious amounts of alcohol to throw off their performance. Sadly, I didn't find ant typo's, I read it several times looking for one. Maybe next poem :)

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Ha ha ha...made me laugh a loud...Nice humorous poem, enjoyed the satire part in your poem..Loved it. I invite you to read my poems, Thanks.

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Loke Kok Yee 18 October 2015

I have my doubts on the last stanza! But coming back to the students and Lance; You mean there are actually traces of blood in your d***/al***** system? You are the master of humor sir and you had me GLOANING again. It is going to be a great day, Thanks Bri

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