Monday, October 3, 2005

Best Bait Comments

Rating: 5.0

the moon floats
on a calm sea
and the fishes
seem to
...
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Chuck Audette
sea
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Someone Else 14 April 2007

My preference is vanilla ice cream floats rather than moon floats; but, I'll accept whatever for the crater good of all.

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alice sunderland 08 November 2006

this is so good! ! ! right up my street.

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Simply brilliant. A wonderful observation. Ez

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Esther Leclerc 06 May 2006

You make a common observation special, Chuck, and often the uncommon as well. Enjoyed this! Est : ]

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Duncan Wyllie 13 March 2006

Lets all swim in this great write.Love Duncan

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Lea Simpson 01 February 2006

I must be a fish, I think it's delicious too. What a great little poem.

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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