Thursday, September 25, 2008

Besides You Comments

Rating: 5.0

And so the warm day finally quietens,
Into a dark nights’ waiting arms;
I nestle into dreams, sliding into,
My favourite place, besides you.
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Anita Atina
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Richard Blanch 01 October 2008

What a delightful movement of sound and suggestion.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 25 September 2008

A beauty! In so few words so much said and what ambience! Great poem. H

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 September 2008

Sounds like a very loving plance Anita... Andrew 10

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