Beside the frozen lake I stand
And from the bank my eyes are drawn
Across the surface still as glass
The blue of mirrored sky,
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Duncan nails it, spot-on...Sterling imagework, that not only takes the reader to the poem...it takes them into the womb & ensconces them in vivid depiction & a sense that you are there.Very Fine Work, Andrew! ~FjR~ .2008.
This is just fantastic you have a way with words Andrew thank you so much for sharing again a lovely piece.
I don't know what it is about your poems Andrew, but sometimes I feel as if I am there with you Love duncan X
What can I say but perfect. Loving every word I read. Superb. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A charming and beautifully descriptive poem Andrew! A pleasure to read! ! ! *10*! ! ! Thank you for sharing! Best regards, Friend Thad
Oh Andrew! ! This is so full of pasion of life... Wildlife.... Your words actually made me feel the coldness and the emptiness as you walked away........ Very good, I totally LOVE your writtings.... Bonnie Collins
You paint your pastoral winter scene with a fine nib and a keen eye for detail. The structure of your poem is precise and lyrical. The warmth of your emotional connection to your subject contrasts pleasingly with its icy canvass. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥