Berthweald Poem by Zyw Zywa

Berthweald



Every morning after the reveille
we hold a bicycle race
from the camp to the Meuse

At full speed I take
the last turn, right into
brand new barbed wire

invisible in the light of the sun
As proficient torturers two others
are colliding with me immediately

Flat tire, torn clothes
In a comic strip, I would now
be hanging horizontally

But I fall, rips in my flesh
gaping and bleeding
Bandages at breakfast

and then I lead my patrol again, what else
after the mysterious providence
of a farmer who's going to pasture on the river?

Saturday, January 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: bicycle,race
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Collection "Bruises"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2019

A GOOD poem amazingly worded. I have enjoyed a few times. Thank you, Zywa!

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Zywa Zywa 16 January 2019

I write almost all of my poems in Dutch, and then translate them. In response to your praise for Berthweald and The Blessed Night I have added the Dutch versions Wellerlooi en De Gezegende Nacht. Dankjewel voor je belangstelling.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2019

Absolutely a hilarious poem. The words you described here do truly show the funny and hilarious situations. Excellently worded, I have enjoyed a very lot. A 10++++++++++++++++++++++++for the ratings/votings. I really do not know what that means, but I just do as the rest, only with my own words. They do oft like this: 10. and that's all, but I am a lecturer and always give something more than the mark, like 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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