Saturday, July 26, 2008

Berry Picking Comments

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Northwest mist hides soft fir tree horizon.
We drive around curves through cold violet gray.
The day never really changes;
A full day of morning.
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Christine Natale
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Susan Jarvis 30 July 2008

Excellent use of alliteration. This poem shouts to the senses in its veil of purple passion! S :)

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James B. Earley 28 July 2008

Poignant thoughts of another place and time. Thanks for the memories!

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Christine Natale

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