Sunday, April 9, 2006

“bernstein, What Good Are You? ” Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught off guard by the question
especially the tone of Treasure’s voice
sad, bitter, aggressive.
“And I’m tired of your talk.”
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Hugh Cobb 10 April 2006

Wherever injustice is it hurts one place and one place only that is the human heart and spirit. Pakistan or down the block doesn't matter at all, what matters is that it ever happens! A heart rending poem.

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Joseph Daly 09 April 2006

Charles I hope this is not a questioning of virtues. It is, as ever, an excellent write and even you should be allowed the occassional expression of doubt if only to reaffirm your greatness. I remember when I first read your work and I thought 'This guy is a poetic Springsteen' but I soon came to realise that whereas the boss reported on the lives of characters, you made humans out of them. Incidently the lines: “This happen over in Brighton Beach/ cause there’s perverts walking them streets.” should have a question mark or it becomes a bit confusing. I only point that out to show how much attention I give to your works.

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